Reveal
You once revealed yourself to me. Your icy exterior thawed by my warm kiss, I saw just briefly, your true colours. I fell in love. But now my visibility is obscured and I am drifting away. One last attempt at ablation is all I have left.
You once revealed yourself to me. Your icy exterior thawed by my warm kiss, I saw just briefly, your true colours. I fell in love. But now my visibility is obscured and I am drifting away. One last attempt at ablation is all I have left.
Very well done!
Thanks Elena. I”m looking forward to writing some more snow-inspired stories as we are expecting a big storm tonight. I’ll be out tomorrow with the camera.
I’m so impressed with your ability to paint word pictures and then refine by adding just the right photo!
Damn you’re good!!!!
Thanks! I’m not sure why I love combining words with pictures so much but I do. So glad you are enjoying them.
Love that last line with its use of the word ‘ablation.’
Thanks Carrie (I have to admit I liked it too). I also tried to get in some multiple meaning with the word ‘sublimation’ but then deleted it as it just didn’t work.