Clouded

From the moment I saw you, I was set adrift from my life.  I follow you, blindly, lost in lust, leaving behind all that I know.  My judgment clouded by love.

I reach for your heart.  My touch, hot, like the blazing sun.

One day,

I will have you.

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9 comments
  1. Whoa. Heady stuff. i wish I were the object of such a determined declaration.

    Aloha,

    Doug

    • Janet said:

      Although you have to be careful. There is a thin like between dedication and stalker. Thanks for coming by Doug.

    • Janet said:

      Yes, the or else was implied. Glad you saw that.

  2. I like the images of being adrift and clouded judgment. Nice!

    • Janet said:

      Glad you thought so. I had it in my head I wanted to write a light flully piece, like the clouds, but I can never seem to do that.

  3. Lynn said:

    Beautiful
    I just met someone who I fell head over feet for, but he has a girlfriend and I am left clouded.
    only time will tell

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