Redesign

Prior to your involvement, I was not pretty enough, not useful enough, not valuable enough. I was open to your suggestions but soon you took control.  What was once mine has been reshaped to suit your own self-interest.

Still, I caress you, seeking approval. You sigh; so much remains undone.

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8 comments
  1. my first time to comment here. I so understand these words, so much so that I felt them. Make sense?

    • Janet said:

      Thank you for coming by. I’m so glad that my words moved you, I think they came from a place in me that needed to share them.

  2. Jessica said:

    When are you going to get these together and bound in an old fashioned coffee table book??

    • Janet said:

      Ha ha. I’m working on it.

    • Janet said:

      I started out trying to be more positive, but by the time I’d finished, it was again on the darker side of love. Oh well, I write what I write.

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