Reveal

IMG_7721

You once revealed yourself to me. Your icy exterior thawed by my warm kiss, I saw just briefly, your true colours. I fell in love. But now my visibility is obscured and I am drifting away. One last attempt at ablation is all I have left.

Advertisements
6 comments
    • Janet said:

      Thanks Elena. I”m looking forward to writing some more snow-inspired stories as we are expecting a big storm tonight. I’ll be out tomorrow with the camera.

  1. I’m so impressed with your ability to paint word pictures and then refine by adding just the right photo!
    Damn you’re good!!!!

    • Janet said:

      Thanks! I’m not sure why I love combining words with pictures so much but I do. So glad you are enjoying them.

  2. Love that last line with its use of the word ‘ablation.’

    • Janet said:

      Thanks Carrie (I have to admit I liked it too). I also tried to get in some multiple meaning with the word ‘sublimation’ but then deleted it as it just didn’t work.

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: