Ties that bind

Ties that bind


I see you on the far side of love. You wave and beckon me over but forged out of necessity more than affection, need more than want, the bond between us lies empty and my connection to you, while physically strong, is weak in sentiment and feeling.

  1. A universal theme done touchingly. The pic draws the reader in by what isn’t illustrated. Nicely done. Dave

    • Janet said:

      Thank you Dave. I always look forward to your comments.

  2. The bridge metaphor works well with this poem (or poetic prose?)

    • Janet said:

      Yes, I’m never quite sure if these short pieces wind up on the poetry or prose side of writing.

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